story organiser

 LI: To write a narrative solution.

LI: To use similes in our writing.

Today i been doing writing and i have to make  a story organiser  and in that story there were a mother bear and a baby bear and i have to make the solution  for the story about baby and it was not that bad but i try my best to finish  this story and make the test  to been good to have a good at narrative.

Solution

Then  baby bear  was falling off the cifft then baby bear was in the  water and then mother bear put baby bear on a flat smooth icy surface. Baby bear is relieved that baby was safe as on a hard  as like a  little boat . Mother bear was so happy to see baby bear  then they  went back with fish to eat the end .