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Wednesday 24 May 2017

show not tell

 

  • The rail is long
  • There is green grass.
  • There  is a green hallway
  • The rail look like bamboo.
  • There is a tunnel that train
  • The is tunnel is green.
  • The rail is long and it got a nice view.   
  • There is a place that train comes through the green Hallway.
  • The hallway is green and it green and the sun shone on the green hallway .
  • The bamboo is green like the green hallway.


              

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